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[KyrieUzumaki]

I would love someone to give a genuine review on book even if you have to read a chapter of two that is enough for me. I would love feedback on what I can do to improve my story :D

My book if called Virgil's Kitten

 

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[KyrieUzumaki]

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Virgil’s Kitten

[Slow Burn] In the heart of medieval times, Atika, a tribal slave girl adorned with intricate tattoos marking her heritage, finds herself on the auction block once again. Known for her fierce spirit and unyielding defiance, she has been sold and returned by numerous masters, none able to tame...

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