smartpants6
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Hi everyone, I’ve been working on a new story called Re:Youth and I’d really value some feedback.
It’s a mix of psychological horror and erotic transformation smut: a young man inherits a cursed ring that can rejuvenate elderly women into their youthful forms but only through sex, and at the "cost" of binding them to him. The story leans into the decay, trauma, and moral corruption this causes, while still delivering explicit content and wish-fulfillment elements.
I’m trying to balance grim, horror-like atmosphere with the NSFW elements, and I’d love to hear what works (or doesn’t) for readers who enjoy darker smut.
If you’re into stories that explore both the psychological fallout of horror and the taboo allure of power/fantasy, I’d really appreciate your thoughts.
Here’s the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1780737-reyouth/chapter/1780738/
Thanks in advance to anyone who checks it out. I’m open to critique on tone, pacing, characters, or just overall vibe.
It’s a mix of psychological horror and erotic transformation smut: a young man inherits a cursed ring that can rejuvenate elderly women into their youthful forms but only through sex, and at the "cost" of binding them to him. The story leans into the decay, trauma, and moral corruption this causes, while still delivering explicit content and wish-fulfillment elements.
I’m trying to balance grim, horror-like atmosphere with the NSFW elements, and I’d love to hear what works (or doesn’t) for readers who enjoy darker smut.
If you’re into stories that explore both the psychological fallout of horror and the taboo allure of power/fantasy, I’d really appreciate your thoughts.
Here’s the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1780737-reyouth/chapter/1780738/
Thanks in advance to anyone who checks it out. I’m open to critique on tone, pacing, characters, or just overall vibe.
Just reading a few chapters and giving feedback would be great