JMCfor
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Hi all! My story follows Lex, who becomes the Will of the Universe, balancing immense power with the struggle to retain his humanity. It’s a mix of cosmic world-building, introspection, and philosophy, inspired by works like Tao Te Ching and existentialism.
Would love feedback on pacing, characters, and world-building. If you enjoy deep, thought-provoking narratives, give it a try!
Here it is
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Would love feedback on pacing, characters, and world-building. If you enjoy deep, thought-provoking narratives, give it a try!
Here it is
I Became universal will
After a tragic accident, Lex awakens as the Will of a Primordial Universe, an unfathomable force tasked with maintaining the delicate balance of creation. But instead of finding purpose in his limitless power, he is overwhelmed by its weight as he is supposed to create planets, galaxies, and...