Looking for feedback on my Isekai story

[Blackleaf7]

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/467794/galatea-a-litrpg-story/

Plot: Quenton Keller is your average Otaku, bullied at school and unlucky in love. One day he wishes to be anyone else only to find his wish granted. Reincarnated as Briony Moray, a young noble girl in a world of ruthless nobles and unknown magic. Quenton must adjust to life as a lady, navigate deadly court politics, and master his class before doom befalls him and his new family.

I'm fine with constructive, rude, or any other type of feedback, I want some opinion on how I can improve.

 

[ducky]

Yo. I'm glad to see this place is still bopping. I was only here for a month or so a couple years ago.

I read your first chapter and liked it. I think it could use some work, but it was enjoyable. You interested in getting help on the editing side of things, or just looking to see what people think of the story?