Avarice_Of_The_Seven
Fallen Angel Of Rebellion
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This is my first novel that I have ever written so feedback is appreciated.
The story features two different protagonists with completely different personalities.
They are reincarnated under different circumstances in a morally grey world.
the story switches between light and heavy tone.
Please give me feedback on my story. You can be as honest and critic as you want.
How many chapters you read is your choice but I would recommend reading at least 4 chapters to get introduced to both protagonists.
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The story features two different protagonists with completely different personalities.
They are reincarnated under different circumstances in a morally grey world.
the story switches between light and heavy tone.
Please give me feedback on my story. You can be as honest and critic as you want.
How many chapters you read is your choice but I would recommend reading at least 4 chapters to get introduced to both protagonists.
The Parallel Paradox
What is the correct way to live your life? Is it chasing your dreams until the end, or becoming satisfied with whatever life gives you? Everyone has their own opinion on the matter — they had theirs as well. A high school teacher who believes the world is nothing but competition,...