Looking for feedback on improving my first work

nyankat

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I'm really trying to work hard on being able to *write* prose I enjoy, as someone who likes stuff that reads fairly fancy. I genuinely don't know how some authors have some surreal word recall and their prose is so pretty and I want to work towards all that. So I'm working on something in earnest.

It's kind of a weird mishmash of genres, and I thought it would be really fun to take something like Omegaverse and really _really_ flip it on its head and make it queer/avoid some of the grossness about it. This story is what came of it:


Any and all feedback welcome, honestly, but I'm very much looking to see how folks feel about the uh, flavor of the text? And also how the story flows. Cheers :)
 
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