Looking For feedback/criticism

Esden-Noir

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I've been serializing my dark fantasy story for about a month now, and I'm excited to share it with readers who love deep world-building, intricate plots, realistic characters, and a truly unforgiving world.

Synopsis:
In a world where shadows dread the darkness, Sylas was raised by Mercy in her orphanage—a woman whose warmth defied a cold, unforgiving reality.

It kicks off with shorter chapters focused on setup and character foundations (Arc 1 is fully uploaded with 16 chapters), but things accelerate quickly with higher stakes, longer chapters, and more intense action coming soon.

If you enjoy grim tales of survival, rising against cruel fates, and a richly crafted setting, I'd love for you to check it out. Feedback and criticism are very welcome—I'm here to improve!

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Thanks in advance to anyone who gives it a read. Your time means a lot!
 
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