Zenomew
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Hi! I'm looking for 1-2 beta readers for my Xianxia story.
Specifically, I'm seeking feedback focused on the story's pacing and plot beats. I want to know if the story flows well from one arc to the next, if the cultivation progression feels appropriately paced, if the plot points land with impact, and if the overall tension builds effectively. Does the pacing feel too slow or too fast in any sections? Are the key events (the 'beats') clear and engaging?
I am open to honest, constructive criticism.
Also, I'd love to connect with writers who are familiar with Xianxia or similar cultivation genres (Wuxia, Xuanhuan, Progression Fantasy), as I'm looking for feedback within that context.
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Specifically, I'm seeking feedback focused on the story's pacing and plot beats. I want to know if the story flows well from one arc to the next, if the cultivation progression feels appropriately paced, if the plot points land with impact, and if the overall tension builds effectively. Does the pacing feel too slow or too fast in any sections? Are the key events (the 'beats') clear and engaging?
I am open to honest, constructive criticism.
Also, I'd love to connect with writers who are familiar with Xianxia or similar cultivation genres (Wuxia, Xuanhuan, Progression Fantasy), as I'm looking for feedback within that context.
Somehow I became the immortal Empress of the holy land
Xiù Feng has only goal to live a long life of luxury and comfort Unfortunately she is stuck with a glitched system in a cutthroat world where power is everything and the strong eat the weak However for some reason all the bigshots want to join her sect or live...
