Hey guys, hope you're good. I am new here and i am currently writing anovel named Alcine. Can i have some feedback one the first chapters please ?
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Alcine
For many centuries the world of Alcine has been under the eye of a group of five spiritual beasts called the Almoran. Through a contractual link, these beasts allow the inhabitants of Alcine to use the spiritual energy called 'Myndo' and to develop extraordinary abilities. Inevitably, due to...