Let's chat about "Dual Souls of Dream Land Online"

[starlet]

Hey everyone!

I know this “Latest Chapter Discussion” forum is kinda dead af, but I’m still gonna try making a thread where we can talk about my novel, Dual Souls of Dream Land Online!

It’s a fantasy story about two waifu-able souls sharing one body in an isekai that’s about to turn into a post-apocalypse game world.

One was a top-ranked solo ice mage player who regressed and transmigrated into her game world. The other is the real owner of the body—a fragile noble girl NPC from a famous ice knight family that was supposed to be annihilated before the game even launched.

I’m aiming for a brighter story with feel-good moments while still throwing in intense challenges and emotional scenes.

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You can use this thread to:

? Share your thoughts on the latest chapters
? Drop your theories on what might happen next
?️ Ask me questions about the world or characters
? Or just hang out and chat!

I’d love to hear what you think, who your favorite characters are, or any ideas you’d like to see in the story. Who knows, maybe your suggestions will end up in the chapters!

Thanks for reading, and let’s keep this thread alive together! ?

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P.S.: If you’re a whale, this poor author always waiting for your pocket money on my Ko-Fi or Patreon!

Every time we hit a Ko-Fi goal or get a new paid patron, I’ll post a free bonus chapter for everyone! ?

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Another P.S.: If you’re an artist looking to build your portfolio, I’m always waiting for your free arts and will give a shout-out to your portfolio link in the chapter too~

I mean, it’s a win-win for us, right? I get free arts, and you get free promotion for your profile?

 

[EphemeralEmperor]

You should find a way to ask your readers to join in maybe. Like @ them or something. They'd probably enjoy it, especially if they already "favorited" the book! Good luck!

 

[starlet]

You should find a way to ask your readers to join in maybe. Like @ them or something. They'd probably enjoy it, especially if they already "favorited" the book! Good luck!

Yes, I'm planning to put this thread link on the author note in the next chapter. Thank you for the advice!

And since you are already here, it would be even better if you become one of my new readers and set my novel as your favorite too

 

[starlet]

Chapters 12 to 14 are up! ?

The main story of the first arc is finally kicking off!

I did my best, especially on Chapter 14, the world turned into a real catastrophe! ?️?

I’d love to hear what you think! Which part stood out the most to you? ?

 

[starlet]

Chapter 15 is out! ?

In this one, Lyra Stelluna goes full commander mode like a total boss ??
What do you think of Lyra in this chapter? ?

 

[starlet]

Chapter 16 is up! ?

Cryssa finally gets her moment to shine... maybe? ?

 

[starlet]

Chapter 17 is out! ?
Would you trust Ayla to lead you in battle? Or would you question her sanity first? ?

 

[starlet]

Chapter 18 is out! ?
If you were suddenly praised as a genius mastermind for something you absolutely did not plan, would you roll with it or confess immediately? ?

 

[Eldoria]

This novel was already on the right track.

Spoiler: Please...

Please don't add more R18 genres! I'm tired of seeing potential novels give up and become R18 just to appeal to a wider audience.

 

[starlet]

This novel was already on the right track.

Spoiler: Please...

Please don't add more R18 genres! I'm tired of seeing potential novels give up and become R18 just to appeal to a wider audience.

sorry for late reply! I thought nobody visited this thread so I didn't open the forum again since a few months ago haha xD

no worries, i don't plan to make it R18~
even the protagonists' armors aren't revealing, right?

u can also see in chapter 26.5 about forum talk where the female players complained about other games but supported Dream Land Online because the female NPCs there are not for fanservice but to be respected, and the game didn’t feel the need to sexualize them to justify their presence~

that's true because I'm trying to write a novel where the female characters are great even without fanservice~

sure it's hard as I am not a female myself, but I will try my best~!

 

[starlet]

After 5 months of hard work, the novel has finally reached 10k views~! ?
And my Patreon is also started growing~! ?

So for this moment, I updated the novel cover~

W-Well... both covers are AI-generated, but at least the new one is way better, right?! >,<

If my Patreon keeps growing, maybe I can hire a real artist for the cover... though, I think I'll need a pro, not a junior artist, to get a really good one and better than this AI art. Not sure how much that'll cost, though... Maybe someone can give me some cost estimate? ?

And hey, if any artists are reading this, I'd LOVE it if you drew something for the novel! Cover art, scenes, characters, anything! I might even use it for real, whether for the cover or to post in a specific chapter, and I'll definitely shout out your name to promote you the artist! Just, uh, please don't expect me to pay, okay? Please spare this poor author... TvT

Previous Cover	New Cover

 

[empalgepuk]

If you live in my country, somewhere around 150 USD can afford you a way better cover than your current one.

Don't rush it if you don't have the money yet.

 

[Macha]

If you live in my country, somewhere around 150 USD can afford you a way better cover than your current one.

Don't rush it if you don't have the money yet.

Our country.

 

[starlet]

If you live in my country, somewhere around 150 USD can afford you a way better cover than your current one.

Don't rush it if you don't have the money yet.

oohh alright, maybe i'll hire one in a few months when the novel reach a specific milestone~