Just Released 3 Chapters – Looking for Honest Opinions!

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Hey everyone,

I’ve just released the first three chapters of my novel. I’ve rewritten my novel to improve the pacing, character depth, and overall storytelling. I’ve taken feedback into account and made major improvements—but I need fresh eyes to see if it truly works. Your thoughts—whether positive or critical—will help me make this even better. If you have a moment, I’d really appreciate it! Thanks in advance! Looking forward to your feedback.

story link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1391054/search-of-tempest/
 
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