Isekai enjoyers, please check out my story.

[Lloyd]

If you like isekai or litRPG you will probably enjoy.

Summoned Zero: Isekai of Dungeons and Kingdoms

A fun, fast paced Isekai about building a kingdom and completing dungeons. Cover art by Ninestar https://www.scribblehub.com/profile/59300/ninestar619/

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[RepresentingWrath]

Your writing is too based for us to handle.

 

[Lloyd]

Your writing is too based for us to handle.

Thanks

 

[Ilikewaterkusa]

If you like isekai or litRPG you will probably enjoy.

Summoned Zero: Isekai of Dungeons and Kingdoms

A fun, fast paced Isekai about building a kingdom and completing dungeons. Cover art by Ninestar https://www.scribblehub.com/profile/59300/ninestar619/

www.scribblehub.com

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[AKnightWithaKnife]

Not my cup of tea kingdom building is a based type of isekai

 

[Lloyd]

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[Viator]

Tried reading a couple chapters so far. You have a good basis and voice, but it seems to move a little quickly, you can take your time to build the world, and don't need to rush to the exciting bits. The best advice I can give is to work on "Show. Don't tell." in your exposition. Otherwise decent start. I will be keeping an eye on it.

 

[Lloyd]

Tried reading a couple chapters so far. You have a good basis and voice, but it seems to move a little quickly, you can take your time to build the world, and don't need to rush to the exciting bits. The best advice I can give is to work on "Show. Don't tell." in your exposition. Otherwise decent start. I will be keeping an eye on it.

I tried to do that, but I am just a fast paced writer. I think I did okay on the show don't tell stuff. I tried to keep the exposition to a minimum. If you would like to beta read for me that would be a big help.

 

[Viator]

I tried to do that, but I am just a fast paced writer. I think I did okay on the show don't tell stuff. I tried to keep the exposition to a minimum. If you would like to beta read for me that would be a big help.

Unfortunately, I am unsure if I have the time to commit to anything at the moment. But I will try to throw out constructive thoughts when I can if that helps. I want to encourage anyone who wants to put themselves out there with their writing. Life is just too chaotic for me at the moment to say how much time I will be on the site. Good luck to you though.

 

[OliviaMyriad]

Not yuri, go next

 

[Lloyd]

I still need more beta readers.

 

[Zirrboy]

You seem to have editors already, which is the only thing I'd be interested in. Story looks like it's on a decent track, though!

 

[Lloyd]

My original editors are inactive sadly, so Im always looking for new ones.

 

[Lloyd]

Thanks for checking my story out.