In need of feedback

[SirDogeTheFirst]

Hello, after taking a long break, I rewrote most of my soft sci-fi, Earth Invasion, novel and I need feedback. I have no viewer interactions, thus no idea if I am doing something wrong, which I probably am, so what is the problem? Maybe my writing, the title, the synopsis, perhaps the AI book cover. I will be very happy if someone helps me by giving their opinion.

The link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/794596/generic-battle-academia/

 

[Tempokai]

Synopsis sounds generic (lol). It's too vague for me. Sure, there's external threat (which sounds exaggerated with "every day"), but what internal threat? I would've expanded what threat it is in the synopsis. "Victim of corruption" doesn't sound right to me, maybe I would clarify more, maybe add some world building like in what state the world is outside of threats. Also, maybe cut the "gathering a team and climb to the top" into two sentences as it blurs both the MC's and team's motivation. Read the first chapter, and the quality is alright for being a webnovel.

 

[SirDogeTheFirst]

Synopsis sounds generic (lol). It's too vague for me. Sure, there's external threat (which sounds exaggerated with "every day"), but what internal threat? I would've expanded what threat it is in the synopsis. "Victim of corruption" doesn't sound right to me, maybe I would clarify more, maybe add some world building like in what state the world is outside of threats. Also, maybe cut the "gathering a team and climb to the top" into two sentences as it blurs both the MC's and team's motivation. Read the first chapter, and the quality is alright for being a webnovel.

Noted, fixing the synopsis. Thanks for the feedback.