If anyone is willing to offer feedback I would appreciate it!

[Obyrith_Daimon]

I'm starting writing a story right now, as i'm aware that my story lacks many things as a new author id appreciate any and all feedback so if you have time please check it out and tell me what you think. Here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/197495/the-last-daimon-of-primus-planan/

 

[RepresentingCaution]

Most readers here are silent. I recommend writing.com or WritersCafe because they both have a point system that incentivises people to leave reviews.

 

[Obyrith_Daimon]

Most readers here are silent. I recommend writing.com or WritersCafe because they both have a point system that incentivises people to leave reviews.

Thanks for the help!

 

[Deleted member 1244]

Most readers here are silent. I recommend writing.com or WritersCafe because they both have a point system that incentivises people to leave reviews.

how do you always get to these so quickly?!?!

 

[RepresentingCaution]

how do you always get to these so quickly?!?!

*shrugs* I just check once or twice a day.