I'd appreciate any advice or feedback. Check it out

[Shadowless3]

Could anyone check out my new story. I'd like any feedback, it's my first time writing as an author. I would like some advice or feedback on my work. Anything would do

Beneath the Crown

Born of royal blood but raised in shadows, she lives among the streets. A bright, reckless spirit with a hidden past and a secret only her sister knows. Careless, curious, and untamed, she has no interest in kingdoms, crowns, or fate. A streetwise troublemaker with a secret past, she hides...

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I am sure u will love it and enjoy reading so please give it a try

 

[Thorkell_40k]

nice~.
I read a few of its chapters