I Wrote A Story About Star Ratings and Elitism (Laugh)

[HouseDelarouxScribbles]

【Arrogant Young Writer】 is a comedy that makes fun of Star Ratings and people who take them too seriously. It follows the story of an arrogant young writer enrolled into a super elite academy and must WRITE to survive. Sound familiar? 「GOODO!」 It should! The first 17 chapters form their own story arc, so you can read them all and not get left behind!

I even hired a paid actor to cut a promo for this book, you can take a 2 minute look-see if this is for you!

I would like certain groups of people to read this story and tell me what they think, in particular I have these questions:

For People Who Have Been Burned By Star Systems - What did you think about the humor used in the story? If you laughed, let me know where! If there were any parts that felt very authentic or real, let me know too!

For People Who Like Wrestling, King of Fighters, Yu-Gi-Oh or Memes - Did you see what I did there? I left a LOT of references out in the open. Did you catch any of them that you liek?

For People Who Watch Vtubers - I put this in a separate category since this is something important to me. If you read all of the first arc, what is the name of my oshi and what does she do? (laugh)

Anyway, I am busy writing now, have to work on the next 25k words before next month, I'll pop by here occasionally, cheerios!

Oh and also, if you read this far anyway, you can send me your book and ONE big point (pacing, characterization, language use etc) and I'll look at the first chapter for you. Hidden review swap? Open review swap. I am writing that chapter now and want to do this for the realsies.

P.S: First time posting in PHP, I usually post on Mxngxlian Basket Weaving Boards.