I wrote a smut story and I need some advice

[IshiharaNiaoka]

Recently I just wrote a smut story called Succubus Mina, and I would appreciate some thoughts on it on how to improve the smut and the plot of the story. I don't wanna write smut for smut sake I would like to add some decent plot which could make it more interesting.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/692770/succubus-mina/

 

[Paul__Michaels]

Do you enjoy your reading your own writing?

 

[IshiharaNiaoka]

Ys

Do you enjoy your reading your own writing?

I'm in the same boat, and for me, it varies from chapter to chapter. Sometimes I think smut-first (i.e. I would like my character to end up in this sexy situation, so how can the plot logically get to this point?) Sometimes I'm thinking plot-first and I look for moments to add the smut afterwards (i.e. can I get away with my character's clothes falling off at this point?)

They key is to ask yourself: is this moment of smut either moving the plot forward or developing a character? If it's not doing either, it might just be smut for smut's sake. That's not to disregard a bit of fan service every now and then though.

Understood thanks for the advice