I would love some feedback on my story - 31 chaps posted.

[HeavenlyPotato]

Scheming to Power

A world of swords and magic would be an exciting one to be reborn in, right? Right? What if the person who was reborn could use neither sword not magic though? What if they had only their brains to slowly bide their time and smell their opportunities? Ah, but what's...

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Would love some comments on how the story is shaping so far, so I know it is worthwhile to continue. Thank you ?

 

[RepresentingCaution]

Howdy! I find that most readers here are silent. If you want feedback, I recommend writing.com since they have a cool gift point system where you can request reviews from others and earn points for giving reviews.