I would like some reviews on my HololiveEN fanfiction.

[Vitou]

Whether you're a HololiveEN fan or not, I would like some opinions on my story. I've been thinking of this story since like December 2021 and finally decided to start writing it a couple months ago. I've gotten a good amount of views on it but not many people have told me what they think about it or given any feedback, not counting my friends on twitter or discord. Also, is it normal that chapter 2 and 3 have more views than chapter 1? Not sure what's that about. Anyways, here it is:

Hololive English: A Destined Battle

6 months after HoloMyth's debut, the girls decided to meet up for a collab. Things get a little hectic on Amelia, Gura, and Ina's side however... When things go south, Amelia is left with no choice but to ask her biggest enemy for help. After which she goes through a rollercoaster...

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[Skalugsuak_Hakarl]

Are you secretly Nousagi? I remember him mentioning writing a HoloEN fanfic in the interview he had with Pippa.

 

[Vitou]

Are you secretly Nousagi? I remember him mentioning writing a HoloEN fanfic in the interview he had with Pippa.

No, I am not him and I don't know who either of those people are, sorry.

 

[Skalugsuak_Hakarl]

Haha, j/k. Nousagi is a youtuber who makes videos about Vtubers. Pippa Pipkin is a Vtuber from a smaller agency who had an interview with him. At one point Nousagi confesses to having written a HoloEN fanfic which he's simultaneously proud and ashamed of.

ANYWAY, it's better to have your writing published and enjoyed by people than doubting your passion for something you created, so good job on sharing your story!?

 

[Vitou]

Haha, j/k. Nousagi is a youtuber who makes videos about Vtubers. Pippa Pipkin is a Vtuber from a smaller agency who had an interview with him. At one point Nousagi confesses to having written a HoloEN fanfic which he's simultaneously proud and ashamed of.

ANYWAY, it's better to have your writing published and enjoyed by people than doubting your passion for something you created, so good job on sharing your story!?

Oh actually now that I think about it, I know who the VTuber is, it's some rabbit girl, I've seen her in memes. But yeah, thanks, I definitely don't doubt my passion. I like my own story and think it's good, just wish I'd get some more opinions from other people too lol.