I would like some feedback on my webnovels first few chapters

Dragongalaxy232

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Hi my Webnovel doesn’t have that many chapters at the moment I have more written and am editing them at the moment however I would appreciate any feedback on my first few chapters (the webnovel is called the unawakened it’s the only one on my profile)
 
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