I would like some feedback about my novels. I am hoping to make some improvements

[Kamana2112]

I have written scifi, thriller and apocalyptic novels and I am hoping to improve my literary journey. Can anyone help me please

 

[CharlesEBrown]

I have written scifi, thriller and apocalyptic novels and I am hoping to improve my literary journey. Can anyone help me please

Posting links here would help. Especially if you have multiple stories you'd like people to look at.