I would like feedback on my first series (plus 2 chapters)

Parade

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https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2249744/urban-valor/

This is the link to my series that I am writing. I have currently published chapters 1 and 2.
The front cover is being drawn, and I have hired an artist.
I am looking for feedback from you, the authors, on any major mistakes I may be making.
This is also the first series I've ever written, so it may be rough. Please excuse my inexperience, and I would love constructive criticism.
 
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