I would like a general overview of how it is so far

[Imahermit]

I would like to have some criticism on how I could improve and how you think the story is going so far, I am writing this more as a learning experience overall so yeah, also some advice on what you think I'm lacking would be nice. And maybe comments on some of my chapters? (for legal reasons this is a joke)

The story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/371759/war-of-the-isles/