I want feedback on my story

[Saam]

Quero algum feedback sobre minha história.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1045420/weight-of-pain/

 

[BetterNickPending]

Dude!
Why did you made title and synopsis and names of chapters in English, but actual content is in Portuguese?
Its a trap!

I can use google translation to try to read it but I doubt it will bear any resemblance to what you wrote...

 

[melchi]

Dude!
Why did you made title and synopsis and names of chapters in English, but actual content is in Portuguese?
Its a trap!

I can use google translation to try to read it but I doubt it will bear any resemblance to what you wrote...

Also, stories here are supposed to be in English. I think translations are okay but it should be tagged as such. Some people on the novel updates site post their translations here.