I need someone to review my work.

Nekouni

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Can anyone here give their opinion about my work?

 

Y2N1

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There's not much to say at the moment since nothing has really happened yet, but I like the start. It's also hinted at the start that Aris is going to the capital city, so the start is just about Aris and her decision to become a knight or not.
 
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