Yaboy_
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This is my first time writing a novel in English. I read some novels, some of them use present tense and some of them use past tense in pov 1. Honestly, it's quite confusing for me. My friend suggested to use past tense, so I complied. It's just that it feels a bit weird when I read it again. If you don't mind, please help me with the grammar check. I suck at English (honestly, I wrote this thread with google translate). If possible, please include the explanation.
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Thank you.
Test chapter
CHAPTER 001 The idea that life had no purpose could be both comforting and frightening; it depended on how you saw at it. Some people wanted to spend the rest of their lives with their loved ones. Some people pursued endless pleasure. Some people just wanted to die. I didn't know why I did this ...
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Thank you.