I need feedback on my web novel

[Redz]

So I been on this website for almost 3 months now and I really want some feedbacks on my web novel "Eclipse"

You can read it here: Eclipse

 

[Eldoria]

I will give general suggestions for your novel; you can consider them or not. There are several things you can improve in your fiction:

First, you can replace your cover with an anime/LN cover. SH readers tend to prefer LN/anime covers. It's even better if your cover features an elegant heroine.

Second, for new novels, it's recommended to release short chapters of 700-1500 words per chapter to increase visibility. Don't release long chapters before you have a large reader base.

Third, the turning point in a new novel usually occurs around chapter 20 or more because, for most readers, a novel with tens of chapters is considered a serious one by the author. You know, many new novels stop at less than 10 chapters. This makes readers sceptical of new novels, as they are perceived as unstable.

Fourth, write a concise, engaging synopsis with a strong hook. I recommend including a moral premise in your synopsis, as it's the most marketable part of the story (if potential readers aren't interested in the story's moral premise, then they're not the target audience for the story).
You can design a moral premise-based synopsis with the following prompt:

[main protagonist with/without his/her identity] + [main conflict of the story] + [goal of the MC] + [worldbuilding] + [potential antagonists] + [protagonist's allies]

Fifth, update regularly, 2-4 chapters a week. Don't update too many chapters at once, as this won't help your novel's exposure.

Sixth, use appropriate tags if necessary, up to the maximum number of tags allowed (25 tags).

Finally, be patient! You can take a break if you're tired. Don't push yourself too hard. Writing fiction requires creativity, not just hard work.

Good luck. Best regards.

 

[Redz]

I will give general suggestions for your novel; you can consider them or not. There are several things you can improve in your fiction:

First, you can replace your cover with an anime/LN cover. SH readers tend to prefer LN/anime covers. It's even better if your cover features an elegant heroine.

Second, for new novels, it's recommended to release short chapters of 700-1500 words per chapter to increase visibility. Don't release long chapters before you have a large reader base.

Third, the turning point in a new novel usually occurs around chapter 20 or more because, for most readers, a novel with tens of chapters is considered a serious one by the author. You know, many new novels stop at less than 10 chapters. This makes readers sceptical of new novels, as they are perceived as unstable.

Fourth, write a concise, engaging synopsis with a strong hook. I recommend including a moral premise in your synopsis, as it's the most marketable part of the story (if potential readers aren't interested in the story's moral premise, then they're not the target audience for the story).
You can design a moral premise-based synopsis with the following prompt:


Fifth, update regularly, 2-4 chapters a week. Don't update too many chapters at once, as this won't help your novel's exposure.

Sixth, use appropriate tags if necessary, up to the maximum number of tags allowed (25 tags).

Finally, be patient! You can take a break if you're tired. Don't push yourself too hard. Writing fiction requires creativity, not just hard work.

Good luck. Best regards.

thanks for the reply! about the cover tho, i can't exactly draw human proportion so i just make a simple cover but i would keep that in mind!

 

[Eldoria]

thanks for the reply! about the cover tho, i can't exactly draw human proportion so i just make a simple cover but i would keep that in mind!

You can use AI to create an anime-style cover. Simply write a detailed cover prompt, then enter the prompt into the input, and ChatGPT will create a pretty cover for you.

 

[Redz]

You can use AI to create an anime-style cover. Simply write a detailed cover prompt, then enter the prompt into the input, and ChatGPT will create a pretty cover for you.

i'm not exactly support ai as an art, but i did had some friends that can draw, but again thanks for the feedback

 

[servo]

I will give general suggestions for your novel; you can consider them or not. There are several things you can improve in your fiction:

First, you can replace your cover with an anime/LN cover. SH readers tend to prefer LN/anime covers. It's even better if your cover features an elegant heroine.

Second, for new novels, it's recommended to release short chapters of 700-1500 words per chapter to increase visibility. Don't release long chapters before you have a large reader base.

Third, the turning point in a new novel usually occurs around chapter 20 or more because, for most readers, a novel with tens of chapters is considered a serious one by the author. You know, many new novels stop at less than 10 chapters. This makes readers sceptical of new novels, as they are perceived as unstable.

Fourth, write a concise, engaging synopsis with a strong hook. I recommend including a moral premise in your synopsis, as it's the most marketable part of the story (if potential readers aren't interested in the story's moral premise, then they're not the target audience for the story).
You can design a moral premise-based synopsis with the following prompt:


Fifth, update regularly, 2-4 chapters a week. Don't update too many chapters at once, as this won't help your novel's exposure.

Sixth, use appropriate tags if necessary, up to the maximum number of tags allowed (25 tags).

Finally, be patient! You can take a break if you're tired. Don't push yourself too hard. Writing fiction requires creativity, not just hard work.

Good luck. Best regards.

This advise even helped me