Writing I need a better synopsis

ConcubusBunny

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An LGBT furry story of a group of individuals in a world of magic science and kingdoms trying to live on this unforgiving world ruled by magic hierarchy.
Above is is my current web novel that I'm writing (not posted yet) that needs a better synopsis so I came here in hopes of getting some advice on how to make it better. I guess I should add some extra details though to get people to have a better understanding with what I'm trying to make.
The story structure is that of plots of would be other books if I centered it around an end goal plot, but I instead use multiple MC's to stream line those said plots, to be honest the main plot of the story are the MC's.
 

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Well, I am gonna be honest with you, it is pretty good, assuming that's your focus. It will do the finest work of filtering out people who will like your work, and who won't.


But that is assuming its the main focus, so, what even is your plot?
 

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Well, I am gonna be honest with you, it is pretty good, assuming that's your focus. It will do the finest work of filtering out people who will like your work, and who won't.


But that is assuming its the main focus, so, what even is your plot?
The plot centers around a group of people working together to preserve the structure of their dimension at any means necessary the story like I said above takes place with them ensuring that the would be plots of other books happens.
I got the idea wondering what would happen if someone orchestrated the plot for both the hero and villain instead everything changed when the villain attacked that most stories do and we could see from their perspective so made this.
I want to find a way to write that into my synopsis without giving too much away.
 

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The plot centers around a group of people working together to preserve the structure of their dimension at any means necessary the story like I said above takes place with them ensuring that the would be plots of other books happens.
I got the idea wondering what would happen if someone orchestrated the plot for both the hero and villain instead everything changed when the villain attacked that most stories do and we could see from their perspective so made this.
I want to find a way to write that into my synopsis without giving too much away.
I see, in that case, I believe

An LGBT furry story of a group of individuals in a world of magic science and kingdoms trying to live on this unforgiving world ruled by magic hierarchy.
Above is is my current web novel that I'm writing (not posted yet) that needs a better synopsis so I came here in hopes of getting some advice on how to make it better. I guess I should add some extra details though to get people to have a better understanding with what I'm trying to make.
The story structure is that of plots of would be other books if I centered it around an end goal plot, but I instead use multiple MC's to stream line those said plots, to be honest the main plot of the story are the MC's.
This synopsis should come at the start as a note,

And then you write about your synopsis, by introducing your main character,
Even if your book doesn't have a main character, write about the organisation, or the character who we are supposed to care about, tell us their name, and a bit about the world.

Then, just write your plan about the future, if you haven't planned an end, a simple,
This is a tale of their adventures
Will suffice, if you have an end planned, then foreshadow it
 

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I do have a main character there's just a lot of them and not one of them is more or less important than the others they all serve a purpose, but thanks anyways
 
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