Hazzybae
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I appreciate new feedback for my story; this forum has been invaluable, and I've gained new readers. I would love to hear both positive and negative opinions about the story so far, including what you like and dislike. Yes, some aspects are vague because I'm aiming for over 1000 chapters, so I'm building a living, breathing world, characters, and a Multi- System (Muti) magic system. Going to sleep, it's been a long day. I hope to wake up to your responses.
Synopsis
Shōnen-style fantasy following Kai Xander and squadmates through a referee-tight Seeker Exam where Muti (the soul-based power) can heal or burn depending on intent.
“Four rookies. One brutal Seeker Exam. A hard magic system that judges actions.”
Synopsis
Shōnen-style fantasy following Kai Xander and squadmates through a referee-tight Seeker Exam where Muti (the soul-based power) can heal or burn depending on intent.
“Four rookies. One brutal Seeker Exam. A hard magic system that judges actions.”