I found the forum only now and I want some feedback...

[Respy]

Okay, I'm the author of the Dark Warlock and I actually wrote 500+ chapters for the story and now I'm trying to translate it to English. I'm also changing some parts I find amateurish because it's my first novel and I was pretty bad at writing fights and complex stuff at the beginning.
I only translated 8 chapters currently but I hope you can give me feedback on those chapters. Your thoughts about the story and my grammar is really important for me :D

 

[Assurbanipal_II]

Does your MC start as thaumaturge and gets promoted later to black mage?

 

[Respy]

Nah, I wanted it to be a darker story at first but I found myself in a normal story with a colder MC. He starts as a mage and I think he finds out what is black magic at chapter 451-452.

 

[Assurbanipal_II]

Nah, I wanted it to be a darker story at first but I found myself in a normal story with a colder MC. He starts as a mage and I think he finds out what is black magic at chapter 451-452.

Was more of a FF joke as you use one as your avi.

 

[Respy]

This is the 5th FF joke-or-reference I didn't understand in this week because I didn't play the game. I'm going to play them... I think

 

[Assurbanipal_II]

This is the 5th FF joke-or-reference I didn't understand in this week because I didn't play the game. I'm going to play them... I think

Excellent.