I decided to make a novel for the first time

[PhoonEz]

hey everyone ,i'm a new author on this website, i was wondering if i could showcase my novel to you all.

This Fantasy World Is Way Too Much for a Mob Like Me — Please, Give Me a Break!

A man wakes up in a world that feels painted — skies brushed in color, memories out of order, and a book that talks back. He doesn’t know where he is, or who he was. All he knows is that something — or someone — is telling his story. The book insists...

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let me know what you guys think of the novel,and please if you have a suggestion or small tips for to make the novel better,please let me know.

 

[blackcrowcrowd]

Go to either:
Authors > Discussions & Writing Tips: https://forum.scribblehub.com/forums/discussions-writing-tips.13/
or
Authors > Story Feedback: https://forum.scribblehub.com/forums/story-feedback.14/

oooor... you can reply my thread, and I would review your story once the previous ones are finished.

[CLOSED] No one wants to review your story? Here I am!

Announcement: For the past few days, I have realized that doing these semi-objective reviews are actually making me enjoy stories less. :blob_pat_sad: I don't know how, maybe because it changed my mindset on reading entirely, but this isn't exactly good news for me. Therefore, I will be stopping...

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