NotaNuffian
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Procastinations aside, how does one do a bleeding timeskip in one chapter of the story without it feeling like out of nowhere. In this instance, my MC is in Boxing day, alone in house no thanks to him getting rowdy, I was doing a simple line like
" he then went to make a PJ toast while musing himself, wishing that this horrible year would end already.
Fast forwarding to 5 minute before New Year..."
The whole fast forwarding feels forced, like I just raise a cardboard that said "5 days later..." to the readers, which felt horrible.
Any ways that I can smooth out or just plainly NOT put the notification that the time has been fast forwarded?
" he then went to make a PJ toast while musing himself, wishing that this horrible year would end already.
Fast forwarding to 5 minute before New Year..."
The whole fast forwarding feels forced, like I just raise a cardboard that said "5 days later..." to the readers, which felt horrible.
Any ways that I can smooth out or just plainly NOT put the notification that the time has been fast forwarded?