If you're seeking more readers, and that's your main goal, a new story title might help.
People's attention span in this day and age is degrading by the minute. On top of that, your time in the spotlight, especially in Scribble Hub, is very limited. Whether you like it or not, you want to be as eye-catching as possible in the smallest amount of time, and to catch some eyes, you gotta be:
1. Simple to read and understand.
2. Jog interest instantly.
3. Be a little pandering.
You could achieve those things with several things, starting with your title. This is by no means an attack or a mockery of your story's title. But in terms of eye-catchy-ness, "Laureate Equisentia" is a bit too complex for the modern attention span. Sure, you could get readers who have the time and creativity to appreciate your title. But simpler titles tend to stick faster in a lot of other readers' minds, especially when they’re scrolling through dozens of others.
Also, I believe your synopsis is pretty good already, especially the first few lines. That said, you might want to simplify or shorten it a little. Synopses are one of the few places where it’s better to tell more than show, since the goal is to catch those eyes real quick. If you’d rather keep your current version though, I’d at least suggest breaking it into shorter paragraphs to make it easier to read.
Reminder that this tip is only for you to gather readers INSIDE Scribble Hub itself. However, I've utilized this method and gained over 2000 readers without outside promotion, though it still did require quite some time for me to reach where I am today.
Please take my advice with a grain of salt, by the way. If you would rather stick with your original title, then feel free to do so.
