KennyCelican
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Uh... Uh oh.
I mean, I haven't been cow-banned on RR yet.
Yet.
Although I'm using my 'Volume One' cover here on SH because the 'Series' cover over on RR looked, as one reader said, 'kinda young'. The new cover is a tiny bit more Anime and looks more 'freshman in college' than 'senior in High School'.
As for Plot Holes if Volumes were dropped... I dunno, man. That would be weird. The Diary is broken into Volumes, yeah, but I literally break the Volume at each Solstice and Equinox, because that's ninety-ish chapters and two hundred to three hundred KWords. Okay, one is like three thirteen and the first one is one seventy-seven, but still. In print they'd be solid chunky books.
But my 'adjustments' so far have been:
- replaced all possibly negative references to 'white people' with IRL references used by brown people when white people are listening, because someone said a brown girl from the hood calling school shootings 'white people bullshit' was 'Racist Against White People'.
- Redacted all mentions of specific numeric age from everyone except one character's daughter, who is not involved in any spicy scenes except as a 'dammit, guess we're done here' ending because she's (as of this month) three years old, and thus Not Involved In That.
- Rewrote all scenes where age had been redacted out.
Of course, they also went from 'can't be the main focus' to 'mustn't be more than fifteen percent of the chapters', which... Honestly if they're saying 'chapters dedicated to adults doing adult activities' that still gives me like a hundred fifty chapters to work with, and so far I've only done, like, five, and at least one of those fades to black before anything really explicit happens. If they're saying 'any chapters where sex is mentioned or implied', I'm cooked, and just waiting for the cow ban.
EDIT to note that 'Senior In High School' ranges from 17 to 19 where we are, and sometimes goes older than that in inner city schools.
I mean, I haven't been cow-banned on RR yet.
Yet.
Although I'm using my 'Volume One' cover here on SH because the 'Series' cover over on RR looked, as one reader said, 'kinda young'. The new cover is a tiny bit more Anime and looks more 'freshman in college' than 'senior in High School'.
As for Plot Holes if Volumes were dropped... I dunno, man. That would be weird. The Diary is broken into Volumes, yeah, but I literally break the Volume at each Solstice and Equinox, because that's ninety-ish chapters and two hundred to three hundred KWords. Okay, one is like three thirteen and the first one is one seventy-seven, but still. In print they'd be solid chunky books.
But my 'adjustments' so far have been:
- replaced all possibly negative references to 'white people' with IRL references used by brown people when white people are listening, because someone said a brown girl from the hood calling school shootings 'white people bullshit' was 'Racist Against White People'.
- Redacted all mentions of specific numeric age from everyone except one character's daughter, who is not involved in any spicy scenes except as a 'dammit, guess we're done here' ending because she's (as of this month) three years old, and thus Not Involved In That.
- Rewrote all scenes where age had been redacted out.
Of course, they also went from 'can't be the main focus' to 'mustn't be more than fifteen percent of the chapters', which... Honestly if they're saying 'chapters dedicated to adults doing adult activities' that still gives me like a hundred fifty chapters to work with, and so far I've only done, like, five, and at least one of those fades to black before anything really explicit happens. If they're saying 'any chapters where sex is mentioned or implied', I'm cooked, and just waiting for the cow ban.
EDIT to note that 'Senior In High School' ranges from 17 to 19 where we are, and sometimes goes older than that in inner city schools.