How do you go about introducing a long-standing or recurring character?

Coffi

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I have my own way of introducing characters that I've been trying to improve.

I'm curious about how other authors introduce characters of their own.

Do you just throw their name in right beside their first comment? Do you give a feel for their personality and then introduce them?
 

KersenBloemNL

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I always start out with some of their actions, before revealing their name. Like in chapter 7 of my current novel, where I introduced a new vigilante, but his name only gets revealed by the end of it, throughout the whole chapter I referred to him as "Hooded man" or something like that.
 

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I have my own way of introducing characters that I've been trying to improve.

I'm curious about how other authors introduce characters of their own.

Do you just throw their name in right beside their first comment? Do you give a feel for their personality and then introduce them?
It depends on the type of story you are writing, but so far for me I tend to introduce a character through the thoughts of the pov character.

Don, my best friend, and neighbor, was a detective who was somewhat successful. It has been two weeks since anyone has seen him. He was best at working on the smaller, nonviolent, crimes, as well as thefts. This made him quite a few enemies, perhaps that is why he went missing. That is what everyone else believes, at least publicly. Yet I, like other natives of this city, always have a gnawing in the back of my mind when someone disappears in winter, constantly reminding me of the Eye.



He was never a superstitious person, always believing in a rational reason for any unknowns. Any rumor had its explanation, and all magic was an illusion. Don wasn’t always that way, though. I remember when we were still boys, and he would cower at passing shadows, thinking that they might have been some strange creature. When walking, he would make sure to never step on a crack. This changed when his parents divorced, and he left Gullnain, with his dad, for Kansafornia. Yet, he would always come back in the summer.



I remember when we first met again, a year after the divorce. My older sister, Phel, told me that Don was coming back for the summer. She had overheard one of our mom’s conversations with Don’s mom, Nora. The next day I waited at the window for him. Finally, at about noon, I saw Nora walking with him. When I saw Don that day, the first thing that I noticed was how he no longer stared at the ground when walking. At that moment, I thought, ‘I didn’t know Don had an older brother.’ He was almost an entirely different person.
 

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It depends on how what kind of story you're writing (omg literal npc introduction!!!1!) . if you want to write a villain maybe have them do something ballsy like blowing up an orphanage or murdering a lot of people (me fr), alternatively you can have the character make a lukewarm introduction before revealing how much said character would impact future events (for example Blackbeard from One Piece). Even if you botch the introduction you can still create a memorable recurring character as the story progresses because first impressions aren't the end all be all. One exercise I'd recommend is studying popular works and see how they introduce characters. In my (objective) opinion cliches aren't as bad as people make them out to be and studying them allows you to build a blueprint so you do the funny subverting expectations thing (Star whores reference!!?! ???)

Of course the best way to introduce any recurring character is to make them have say gex ??
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CupcakeNinja

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I have my own way of introducing characters that I've been trying to improve.

I'm curious about how other authors introduce characters of their own.

Do you just throw their name in right beside their first comment? Do you give a feel for their personality and then introduce them?
depends on whose pov the story is being told from in the moment.
 

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An Inclement Proposal, with omniscient narrator: Generally, I start off the chapter looking at these new characters, and then dovetail it into the main couple's story.

Anything Else Cause It's Basically All First Person POV: We learn of and about them as the protagonist does, I guess?
 
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