Writing How do I move from a slice-of-life arc to an action arc?

Jemini

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Well dayum, I read the manga of that and there was a part where it switched to action? Guess I never reached it, must have been somewhat far ahead. Thanks for all the advice... And adding so many shows to my watchlist lmao.

Thanks to everyone else to, I think I have an idea of what to do now. There's already been a couple fight scenes here and there so I may as well deliver.

Lol, yeah, I just find examples of the concepts in practice to be a lot more valuable than just spouting theory. That's why any time I know of an example I will provide it, and for the sake of convenience I will usually try to stick to things that have some form of video media which would allow the person taking the advice to get to the relevant point in a few hours. Feature films are the best to use as examples because those can be viewed in the space of around 2 hours, which means that even if we allow for the time it takes to set up the movie and the time you have to set aside to get ready, it won't take much more than 3 hours out of a person's day to digest this example.

(Of course, I can't always provide such a convenient example. The saint's magic power example is over half way into the 12 episodes that have been adapted to anime. This would mean that in the source material the point it's at probably corresponds to the end of the 2nd book. (That's my guess anyway, I haven't read the source material.)

Oh well, works out if you happen to enjoy the material I'm recommending. You likely won't begrudge it being longer than my usual standard for example recommendations.
 

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I have the opposite "problem", I am heavily inspired by Golden Kamuy(in style, rather than story) and just like Golden Kamuy, I want to masterfully intervene in comedic, action, and sad scenes without a moment of break or prolonged build up between them.

Whether I succeed, remains to be seen.
 

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So, there's been a lot of lighthearted scenes in my story lately, but now they have to face the B.B.E.G. Problem is, I'm having trouble changing the 'mood' of the story. I feel like having a battle immediately wouldn't feel right? Anyone have a general idea on how to pull that 'mood change' off?
Edit: The story is a fantasy story with comedic moments, but that's not the full focus. There's already a lot of tension built up, and there's already some planning and opinions done by the main cast. B.B.E.G is known but not introduced.
You escalate. Throw in conflicts and slowly make things worst.

for example:
- One of mc’s friends(B) suddenly looks gloom, so our mc and the others ask what the problem is.
- B keeps quiet and refuses to answer directly.
- Suspicious, mc and friends tried to find out.
- They then find out what the problem is, and it’s quite sinister.
- thing get bad and bad as mc and friends get involved in this case more and more.
- and on and on…

See? You throw in a hint of trouble first and slowly escalate by making things worse and worse as times pass by.
 
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