Hiya! I'm new here and I'd appreciate if people would give me a review or two!

[Hexenblume]

Aaah, I'm an amateur writer and I'm pretty new so I don't expect anyone to know me. But I'd greatly appreciate it if someone reviewed my book. If you do, I'd greatly appreciate the feedback, and thank you!

The Harmless Sweetie is Far From Harmless [Under Editing]

One hundred and fifty years ago, The Witch of Despair fell into a slumber. Fires burnt like raging hellfire as kingdoms fell and mountains turned to plains, her agonized scream and cry over her betrayal resounded throughout the Isles. And her final wish, all but forgotten to the people of...

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Have a nice day! ^^

 

[Lloyd]

I'm not a big fan of the reincarnated by a bunch of gods start to be honest. I prefer the simple smashed by a truck while trying to save someone wake up in another world style reincarnation, anything to cut out unnecessary exposition. As someone with the attention span of two goldfish glued together, it didn't really catch my interest.

 

[Hexenblume]

I'm not a big fan of the reincarnated by a bunch of gods start to be honest. I prefer the simple smashed by a truck while trying to save someone wake up in another world style reincarnation, anything to cut out unnecessary exposition. As someone with the attention span of two goldfish glued together, it didn't really catch my interest.

Ooh, understood, I'll take your feedback and use it for my future works. Reduce exposition and just get straight right into it.

Thank you so much!

 

[JollyBear]

Honestly, I like the god trope and the introduction. I'm a person that likes to know the backstory and goal of a story, so the life "selection process" is enticing for me. Stories aren't necessarily bad; they are just who likes this type of story, and who doesn't. So far, in my opinion, it's a good story.

 

[Hexenblume]

Honestly, I like the god trope and the introduction. I'm a person that likes to know the backstory and goal of a story, so the life "selection process" is enticing for me. Stories aren't necessarily bad; they are just who likes this type of story, and who doesn't. So far, in my opinion, it's a good story.

Thank you! This means a lot, I'll be sure to add more lore about the gods and how the whole system works then.

Have a nice day then!

 

[JollyBear]

Thank you! This means a lot, I'll be sure to add more lore about the gods and how the whole system works then.

Have a nice day then!

Looking forward to it.