Hi there, I would like a feedback

[PalatineWritter]

Hi I'm starting on writting and your feedback would be really important ?

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1074277/litrpg-world/

 

[PalatineWritter]

Hey folks!

Exciting news! This week, I'll be reviewing and expanding the chapters to refine the story and add more depth ?. Your feedback has been invaluable, and I want to make sure the journey is as immersive and thrilling as possible.

Stay tuned for the updated chapters, and feel free to share any thoughts or suggestions you have. Your input helps shape this world!

Happy reading

 

[MasFaqih]

Emm, do you want me to write it here or I have to personally chat you?.

 

[PalatineWritter]

You can PM me if you think it's better?

 

[MR_Ethan]

Hi I'm starting on writting and your feedback would be really important ?

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1074277/litrpg-world/

Want to swap works? I read yours and you read mine? I'm new to this site so bare with me.

Arash: The Four Orbs

"How do you want to be remembered?"Thousands of years ago, during the Age of Adventurers, the phrase lingered over a smiling sorceress before an entire generation mysteriously vanished, including her. Assuming the generation has decayed, pieces from it have fell into the world bringing to light...

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