Hi, i am new here and would love to have feedback regarding a new story i am writing!

[Homuro]

Definitely not gonna get discouraged especially when this is what I asked for. I appreciate the read and evaluation. I will admit that I agree with some of your points and disagree with some. But your points are very well noted. I definitely have some stuff to think about!

 

[kingsky123]

I'd more than happy to do a review swap with you. Be ho est with me and I will do so with you. I want to get nbetter so good or bad feel free to rip me a new one.

Hi i read your work and left a comment! i think the story is fine but i have issues trying to picture the world you are trying to build (Like its a world with magic, adventurer guilds, subsistence farming? poor villages? but has a modern car so i am kind of confused of the technological development of the world

Thank you for liking my work but i am going to re-do it :P, its a mess i feel and i will try to restructure my plot and story.

 

[2021]

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