Hey guys can you give me feedback on my novel.

[not_viggy]

I'm still a newbie writer and I don't really know how to evaluate my work.
Out of the five chapters, the first 3 chapters are just reincarnation and world building but can you guys still give me feedback for it it so far.

Here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1376526/the-prodigys-rebirth-wealth--power/

 

[philpil2010]

i would but i'm not the biggest fan of stuff with the bissness tag