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[MizumiSonozawa]

Hey guys, just thought I might show off my series here. Please give it a read!

The Wayward Journey

18 Year old Mikhail Olenev's life was never a normal one. At 13, his parents who originally went out on a business trip were unfortunately killed by pirates. Ever since then, he worked for the very man who took him in, Zantio Slavhar. One day, his life changes. Zantio Slavhar puts Mikhail...

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[Eldoria]

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[TinaMigarlo]

Hey guys, just thought I might show off my series here. Please give it a read!

The Wayward Journey

18 Year old Mikhail Olenev's life was never a normal one. At 13, his parents who originally went out on a business trip were unfortunately killed by pirates. Ever since then, he worked for the very man who took him in, Zantio Slavhar. One day, his life changes. Zantio Slavhar puts Mikhail...

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I glanced at the first chapter.
I'm impressed.
Real paragraphs! Real sentences!
No random bold and italics everywhere.
reads like... a book, really. A paperback.
like I said, I'm impressed.

I'm going to mark this and maybe read the first chapter at least, next time.
too many of these "hey look at this" are all.... one sentence paragraphs, tiny sentence fragments.

gave you a "like", just for using real big boy paragraphs and real sentences.
any review will have to wait until I read it, but i suspect you'll be fine.

 

[MizumiSonozawa]

Everything up until now was directly from my full length book.