Gryphon
The One who has the Eyes
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So as the title says, I'm new to this site and I recently posted a story called My Succubus Roommate and am wanting some opinions on if I should do something different, is it good, bad, or literally anything. I can take any criticism by the way no matter how harsh. There are 3 chapters out currently, averaging to around 2000 words for each chapter.