hello,I'm a new author and want to get some feedback on my first novel adaptation.

[lurkcat]

I’m writing a new story inspired by Journey to the West — but this one’s a fast-paced, mini English version.
It’s about a wild monkey born from stone who dares to challenge fate, gods, and even heaven itself.

Each chapter is short and cinematic — no long descriptions, just pure adventure and emotion.

If you like stories about rebellion, freedom, and destiny — give it a read and tell me what you think.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1921927/the-monk-and-the-demons/

 

[R.G.Graf]

It's a smooth and enjoyable read. Definitely something I can check back in on from time to time to see how you're doing.