Hello, I am look for feedback on my story.

V8485

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I would be thankful for any comments on my novel that I'm currently working on.

Novel Link:The Devil Been Isekai | Scribble Hub

I would be thankful for any comments on the novel, and I'm grateful for your time even if you don't comment.
 

TheVanityWorks

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3.1/10, Make some description in the dialog too, I know who's talking but it's tricky if there is three people talking, it would have been better if you use the dialog script format.
 
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