Aphel
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Hey I've started my writing with Ar'cen but then I made a 100 readers special chapter but then I couldn't stop my self from keep on going.
and so I decided to make it its own fiction Ar'cen : demon in reception, And It feels a lot better than My original one, I cant really understand, I don't think my writing style changed, but all I can think of is, that the tone of alternative is much more lighter at the start ? I don't think that is it tho.
I would really appreciate any honest opinion that could help me understand their difference and why it makes them better, it could help me improve my story telling.
Thank you for reading this thread and I will be even more grateful if you try and help me.
Edit : the story changes after chapter 7, chapter 8 in the alternative, is the weakest chapter imo, so If you don't want to waste time, it be nice if you could read a few chap from both and come back to me.
and so I decided to make it its own fiction Ar'cen : demon in reception, And It feels a lot better than My original one, I cant really understand, I don't think my writing style changed, but all I can think of is, that the tone of alternative is much more lighter at the start ? I don't think that is it tho.
I would really appreciate any honest opinion that could help me understand their difference and why it makes them better, it could help me improve my story telling.
Thank you for reading this thread and I will be even more grateful if you try and help me.
Edit : the story changes after chapter 7, chapter 8 in the alternative, is the weakest chapter imo, so If you don't want to waste time, it be nice if you could read a few chap from both and come back to me.
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