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[Noveloo]

This is the novel i am writing Reincarnation of a forgotton god .pls help to get me feedbacks .
here is the link to novel.

Reincarnation of a forgotten god

Ador Raukings was no ordinary boy because he is no ordinary soul. Reincarnated into the world of Gracia, a land brimming with magic, martial arts, and cultivation, he awakens as an orphan with only fragments of his past life. Memories of divine halls, blazing skies, and unimaginable power...

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[Sunflower465]

No offense, but this reads like Ai. but if it is not, I would slow down your pacing. Everything seems to be happening at the same time and the MC just makes impossible inferences. Spend some time on the dialogue, and worldbuilding. The MC seems like a robot. But other than that, I would have spacing for your paragraphs to make it read better. But I am almost 99% sure this is ai.