Hellf*cked - subversive succubus

[7ydy]

I'm uploading an edit of a story i have posted on Ao3 because I heard Scribblehub is friendly to original stories. I'm proud of what i've worked on, have read that seeing a story from the succubus's perspective is totally new. I'm gonna upload 2 chapters a week, and hopefully publish as an ebook in a few months.

I am not super sure about the tags, lmk if there's stuff i missed which i should include!

hopefully it should be obvious that my story is very nsfw but it is

HELLF*CKED – or: devil on her shoulder

A demon girl is bound by her Summoner. The deal they make, and what comes after. Psychedelic autistic demonic dickgirl dubcon. IT'S not SMUT. They fuck on page one. It's also a slowburn. this is not a contradiction if you're a lesbian. Cross uploading with ao3. if you need to...

www.scribblehub.com

(i drew the main characters)

 

[7ydy]

bumping cuz i have had my first review and have uploaded 50 pages

 

[7ydy]

bumping with some demon girl art

 

[Assurbanipal_II]

 

[StoneInky]

It was hot. Very hot. You wasted no time getting right into the smutt, and it was very well written, lmao.

The plot also surprisingly made a lot of sense despite this being smutt. The background magic fantasy stuff intrigues me.

The only thing that bothered me was the use of some metaphors. I did not expect to see the words 'tectonic plates' in the middle of a scene, for example. And later I started to wonder if some expressions were metaphors or not, like the 'keys' inserting into a 'hole'. Are we talking about real keys, or... you know. That, and you might want to run your work through a spellchecker to fix any grammar mistakes.

Overall, it was everything as advertised. I liked it.

 

[7ydy]

The only thing that bothered me was the use of some metaphors. I did not expect to see the words 'tectonic plates' in the middle of a scene, for example.

she's an elemental demon ;)

And later I started to wonder if some expressions were metaphors or not, like the 'keys' inserting into a 'hole'. Are we talking about real keys, or... you know.

real sexual keys