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Beyond Infinity

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Synopsis:
In a world where supernatural phenomena manifest from the raw intensity of human fears, desires, and emotions, I—Hoshino—have always carried a peculiar yearning: the desire to be hurt and to hurt others.
This desire shaped my life, twisting it into something incomprehensible. In middle school, I was trapped in the 「Last Void」—a realm that exists beyond comprehension, where reality is swallowed and rewritten. By high school, I had shattered the flow of time itself. I merged with my future to recreate my past, and in doing so, broke my present.
In my third year, I asked my lover to kill me. She refused. So, I took the knife into my own hands, carving out my end in front of her eyes. Why? I don’t even remember anymore. I only hoped that this time, I could finally die.
But hope is a cruel liar. Death never came for me.
Instead, I was thrust into an endless cycle: transmigrating into others’ bodies, reincarnating with fractured memories, regressing to my own timeline, and living through countless worlds—each more twisted than the last.
I now exist in a multiverse of infinite worlds, each teeming with infinite versions of myself. In one, I watch my comrades die with tears in their eyes. In another, I’m the one who kills them without hesitation. Every possibility unfolds before me, connected by invisible strings of choice and consequence.
Power, fame, wealth—none of it holds meaning here. Emotions, trust, love, and peace are luxuries that cannot survive in this endless labyrinth of realities.
This world is a tapestry of nightmares: a dystopia built from the shattered fragments of infinite tragedies. It’s a fool’s paradise where illusions blur with reality, and truth itself is suspect. The only constants are desires that twist probability and choices that fracture possibilities.
No matter how many times I die or how many realities I endure, the tragedy never ends. The strings of fate tighten, and I am left to wonder: am I the puppet, or the puppeteer?
This is a story without heroes, without endings. A cycle of despair where every hope is swallowed by the void, and every life is just another iteration of pain.

Genre
DramaFantasyHorrorMysteryPsychologicalSci-fiSeinenSupernaturalTragedy

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Alternate World Apathetic Protagonist Comedic Undertone Dark Death of Loved Ones Delusions Forgetful Protagonist Lack of Common Sense Loneliness Manipulative Characters Multiple POV Murders Mysterious Illness Non-linear Storytelling Outer Space Parallel Worlds Parasites Suicides System Administrator Time Loop Time Manipulation Time Paradox Transmigration Twisted Personality Unreliable Narrator




Put some criticism here or something.

Renewed some starting chpaters that were bad and now are atleast moderate.


Note:I have only 10—20 days left to live.I have scheduled atleast 100 chapters of this novel and the rest novels i have, I've also written them while i was bored, i guess(?).So if you don't get any response from me after December, then that means my chronic illness got the better me.See ya.
 
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No one came so I'll take that as a no and take that as my novel is absolute dogshit.

I'll just delete my novel and make a fresh new one.

A fresh new novel with Renwed chapters and no promoting since i am getting tired.
 

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No one came so I'll take that as a no and take that as my novel is absolute dogshit.

I'll just delete my novel and make a fresh new one.

A fresh new novel with Renwed chapters and no promoting since i am getting tired.
That's not it. Some of us don't want to do any review swaps because we are busy or have done a few recently. It has nothing to do with your novel being good or bad since we would have to read it to know.
 
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That's not it. Some of us don't want to do any review swaps because we are busy or have done a few recently. It has nothing to do with your novel being good or bad since we would have to read it to know.
Already deleting the chapters and just know need to move the chapters.
 

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Note:I have only 10—20 days left to live.I have scheduled atleast 100 chapters of this novel and the rest novels i have, I've also written them while i was bored, i guess(?).So if you don't get any response from me after December, then that means my chronic illness got the better me.See ya.
Hi, I hope it's not as serious as you describe it to be. I wish you the very best!

If you need any sort of help, a stranger on the internet can offer please talk to me.

I'll gladly read through your novel after I get a few hours of sleep! Really interested in what you have cooked up! Ready to give you some feedback in 6 to 8 hours :)
 
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Hi, I hope it's not as serious as you describe it to be. I'll wish you the very best!

If you need any sort of help, a stranger on the internet can offer please talk to me.

I'll gladly read through your novel after I get a few hours of sleep! Really interested in what you have cooked up! Ready to give you some feedback in a 6 to 8 hours :)
Unfortunately or Fortunately It's as serious as i describe it.
 

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The renewed version :https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1314971/byeond-infinity---renewed-/

Sadly i have to spend my time renewing all of voulume 1 to 52.which is a pain.
And with a minimum of sleep, i might think I'll die quicker.

Just read the first few chapters, and I can only use the famous quote: "My disappointment is immeasurable, and my day is ruined."

Not because it’s a bad story, but because after just a few chapters, I’m confused, depressed, and not in the mood to continue my own story…

Anyway, you’ve got my interest, and I’ll read more in the coming days.

I can’t stomach more than a few chapters each day, though.

Usually, I read stories to distract myself from the "normal and bland" life, not to make me crave it, haha.
 

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Beyond Infinity

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Synopsis:
In a world where supernatural phenomena manifest from the raw intensity of human fears, desires, and emotions, I—Hoshino—have always carried a peculiar yearning: the desire to be hurt and to hurt others.
This desire shaped my life, twisting it into something incomprehensible. In middle school, I was trapped in the 「Last Void」—a realm that exists beyond comprehension, where reality is swallowed and rewritten. By high school, I had shattered the flow of time itself. I merged with my future to recreate my past, and in doing so, broke my present.
In my third year, I asked my lover to kill me. She refused. So, I took the knife into my own hands, carving out my end in front of her eyes. Why? I don’t even remember anymore. I only hoped that this time, I could finally die.
But hope is a cruel liar. Death never came for me.
Instead, I was thrust into an endless cycle: transmigrating into others’ bodies, reincarnating with fractured memories, regressing to my own timeline, and living through countless worlds—each more twisted than the last.
I now exist in a multiverse of infinite worlds, each teeming with infinite versions of myself. In one, I watch my comrades die with tears in their eyes. In another, I’m the one who kills them without hesitation. Every possibility unfolds before me, connected by invisible strings of choice and consequence.
Power, fame, wealth—none of it holds meaning here. Emotions, trust, love, and peace are luxuries that cannot survive in this endless labyrinth of realities.
This world is a tapestry of nightmares: a dystopia built from the shattered fragments of infinite tragedies. It’s a fool’s paradise where illusions blur with reality, and truth itself is suspect. The only constants are desires that twist probability and choices that fracture possibilities.
No matter how many times I die or how many realities I endure, the tragedy never ends. The strings of fate tighten, and I am left to wonder: am I the puppet, or the puppeteer?
This is a story without heroes, without endings. A cycle of despair where every hope is swallowed by the void, and every life is just another iteration of pain.

Genre
DramaFantasyHorrorMysteryPsychologicalSci-fiSeinenSupernaturalTragedy

Tags
Alternate World Apathetic Protagonist Comedic Undertone Dark Death of Loved Ones Delusions Forgetful Protagonist Lack of Common Sense Loneliness Manipulative Characters Multiple POV Murders Mysterious Illness Non-linear Storytelling Outer Space Parallel Worlds Parasites Suicides System Administrator Time Loop Time Manipulation Time Paradox Transmigration Twisted Personality Unreliable Narrator




Put some criticism here or something.

Renewed some starting chpaters that were bad and now are atleast moderate.


Note:I have only 10—20 days left to live.I have scheduled atleast 100 chapters of this novel and the rest novels i have, I've also written them while i was bored, i guess(?).So if you don't get any response from me after December, then that means my chronic illness got the better me.See ya.
The synopsis is amazing though I guess I'll give it a read
 
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Just read the first few chapters, and I can only use the famous quote: "My disappointment is immeasurable, and my day is ruined."

Not because it’s a bad story, but because after just a few chapters, I’m confused, depressed, and not in the mood to continue my own story…

Anyway, you’ve got my interest, and I’ll read more in the coming days.

I can’t stomach more than a few chapters each day, though.

Usually, I read stories to distract myself from the "normal and bland" life, not to make me crave it, haha.
Heh.
Thanks for reading.

And did you really just feel depressed with just a few chapters?If yes then oh then the upcoming chapters are 100% more depressing.
Each volume has a despair meter.
Volume 1 has a despiar meter of 2—9.
The synopsis is amazing though I guess I'll give it a read
Thank you!
 
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