LesserCodex
A milf enjoyer who lives in your walls.
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So it's 2 Am and I need to sleep to work tomorrow but I got bit by the writing bug a while ago and have made a quick draft of this concept I had in mind and wanted to see whether or not I made an engaging first half of the chapter. So I'd appreciate anyone willing to give a quick look. And to let me know if I went too hard on showing my main character's emotions and if I've gone too hard on the foreshadowing. on his backstory.
I haven't put any tags but it's an action, sort of apocalypse story I guess. no romance. Haven't even thought of that. But anyways chao and goodnight or good morning.
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I haven't put any tags but it's an action, sort of apocalypse story I guess. no romance. Haven't even thought of that. But anyways chao and goodnight or good morning.