Giving feedback based on the first 3 chapters of your story(closed)

[c37]

Sooo.... I've been bored recently and wouldn't mind reading a few chapters to go on a journey to find new engaging novels.
Though be aware, I'm not really great at giving feedback and sometimes I might get frank.... like calling your mc bland as a papercup level frank. (sorry) I'd just give a general view on what I felt while reading the chapters.

I prefer horror, thriller, romance genre.
Please no fanfics.
also please no harem

Try mine, I have to warn you, they are not good(narrative-wise). Also, skip the prologue. It is in my signature.

 

[DismaiNaim]

Looks like you have enough already, but here's mine.

A Place To Bloom

Caleb of Gath wants nothing more than to climb mountains, hunt in the forest, and chase girls around the village, until he's called to war. He's never held a sword. As the truth unfolds, he must sacrifice everything he thought he knew about the world and grapple with the darkness...

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